Children watching TV on regular base before the age of two may demonstrate the degradation of the intellectual development in thier later years. Children under the age of two should daily practice one of their basic insincts, watching and touching objects as much as posible just to learn the place where they are surrounded with. Simply speaking, they need to see a wide variety of things around them. TV makes the children focus on the screen for minutes and hours, and ultimately limit their view in the screen. Young children sitting in front of the screen long and much develp this limited view not only toward the screen but also the world outside.
TV의 악 영향
정기적으로 TV를 시청한 두살 이전의 아이들은 성장후에 지적 발달저하를 보일 지도 모름니다. 두살 이전의 아이들은 그들 주변에 대해 배우기 위해서, 가능한 많은 주변사물을 보거나 만지면서 매일 그들자신의 본능적 감각을 잘 익혀야 한다. 짧게 말하자면, 주변을 폭넓게 보는 것이 필요하다. TV는 아이들을 몇분, 몇시간 동안 화면에 집중하게 만든다. 그리고 궁극적으로 아이들의 시야는 제한하게 만든다. 어린 아이들은 오랜동안 TV화면 앞에 앉아 제한된 시야는 키우고, 뿐만아니라 세상에 대한 시야도 쫍히고 있다.
페러프레이징
Children watching TV on regular base(regulary,often, routinely, habitually) before the age of two may demonstrate(show, prove, display, exhibit) the degradation(decrease, loss, difficulty) of the intellectual(mental, academic) development in thier later years. Children under the age of two should daily practice(exercise, learn, use, experience, be exposed to) one of their basic insincts(intuition, talent, inclination, sense), watching and touching objects as much as posible just to learn the place where they are surrounded with. Simply speaking(Briefly, speaking, In summary, To sum up, In short) , they need to see a wide variety of things around them. TV makes the children focus on(concentrate on, aim on) the screen for minutes and hours, and ultimately limit their view(vision, sight, mind, perspective) in the screen. Young children sitting in front of the screen long and much develop(increase, generate, form, promote, propel) this limited view not only toward the screen but also the world outside.
이제 TV는 양반이다. 요즘은 더 많은 것들이 우릴 바보로 만들 수 있다. ㅎㅎㅎ
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